23 November 2005

He meticulously checked his team’s weapons, just as he always did. Two of the seven were pissed off but cleaning their M-4 carbines nonetheless. He wasn’t considered the most poplular, but he was thorough. He then checked the vehicles. Three up-armored hummers riddled with pock marks from IED shrapnel. At his displeasure, two more soldiers scrambled to find a fuel can to top off their vehicle.

Gottdamned complacency was setting in, he thought to himself, a knot forming in his stomach, he spat on the desert floor just before walking to the CP for an update while his team squared away the deficiencies he had found. “Get your shit together gottdammit, I’ll be back in five and you’d better be tight,” he had barked. They were good kids. Kids, he thought, he was only a few years older than them himself at 26.

He stepped into the CP for the brief from the S2. This was their third convoy this week and their 113th since arriving in country some 8 months ago. Three of the seven had been with him from the start. They had lost two to IEDs, one fatal and one bad enough to buy a ticket home. Another of the original seven went and got himself promoted and now had his own team. They often passed each other on the road heading in opposite directions. The fourth left on emergency leave and never came back.

He sat in his seat, staring out the window as the trees went by at a rapid pace. “Mom,” he asked, “when are we gonna get there?”

“In just a few minutes honey,” she answered stealing a glance in the rearview mirror. “Are you excited to pick up your sister from school?”

“Yeah mom, cause I wanna go buy the Turkey for dad for when he comes home for Tanksgiving,” the four year old with sandy blonde hair and bright blue eyes strapped into his car seat matter-of-factly answered.

She smiled, almost unable to contain herself. She too was excited.

He smiled at the sight of his team standing at rigid attention in front of their hummers, weapons at the position of present arms as he approached. OK smart asses, let’s get to the brief. He shared with his team the intel he got from the 2. He went over procedures for contact as he always did, the more seasoned members his team rolling their eyes as they always did. “Let’s go,” he quietly yet firmly said. They climbed into their chariots under the roar of two CH47 Chinook helicopters passing overhead.

She was frustrated with the traffic trying to get on base. The gate guard was checking every driver’s ID causing the line of cars to move at a snail’s pace.

Traffic was unusally light on the road. From the lead vehicle he keyed the mic, “keep your eyes peeled for anything suspicious, my spidey sense is up today.”

“And why should today be different from any other day spidey?” came over the radio in a tinny encrypted voice, followed by a few chuckles. He looked at his driver who was beaming from ear to ear. “You leaving tomorrow on R&R sarge?” the driver asked without taking his eyes off of the road ahead.

“Yeah,” he said wiping the sweat dripping down from beneath his kevlar helmet.

She tipped the commissary bagger two bucks she really couldn’t afford, buckeld the kids into their seats, and slid behind the wheel of their SUV, her skirt hiking up exposing her shapely left thigh. A thigh that longed for his touch. A thigh she missed feeling his hand on as he fell asleep next to her. A thigh she covered pulling her skirt back over while closing the heavy door.

The explosion lifted the right rear of his vehicle into the air, flipping the hummer onto its left side.

The crash slammed her head into the steering wheel. An old red pick-up truck had slammed into the SUV’s rear as she was backing out of the parking spot. She immediately checked on the kids thanking God they were alright, albeit crying loudly. She took a second to collect her thoughts noticing blood trickling down her cheek.

He immediately checked on his driver cursing his death but not pausing a second, struggling to free himself from the half-overturned vehicle as bullets struck the now exposed underbelly. He could taste the salt of his own blood as he began kicking out the windshield. Squeezing through the frame where the windshield had once been, he rolled onto the ground keeping the hood of the truck to his right for cover, his M-4 in hand he immediately started returning fire. His heart and mind were in a horse race as he fought the enemy and the urge to get up and run to his trail vehicles to check on his soldiers.

He yelled, “mommy! mommy! mommy! what happened?” She wiped the blood from her forehead and unbuckled he and his sister, leading them from the SUV to the shade of a nearby tree, comforting her scared children with words of reassurance, “It’s OK babies, just a little accident.”

He low crawled from his upturned hummer to the second vechicle where both occupants had dismounted and taken up defensive positions fiercely engaging the enemy with all they had. He cut off a scream as the burn of a 7.62mm AK47 round struck his left thigh. “You guys alright?” he yelled over the report of automatic weapons fire. He was answered with a quick pair of nods. “Cover me!” he yelled and stood up to run to vehicle number three.

He held tightly to his mom, not understanding what had happened. His 7-year old sister attempted to comfort her little brother with words and a hug.

He fell to the ground partly from the pain in his thigh, and partly from the explosion of vehicle number three as a rocket propelled grenade slammed into it killing three of his men. His heart broke just before a bullet struck his right shoulder shattering the bones within. “Sarge!” he heard from behind him as another explosion sand-blasted his face. Rolling to his right, he winced in pain, desperately trying to pull the trigger. He barely felt yet another hot round hit his left foot as he faded out of consciousness.

She layed in bed with their daughter on her left, their son on her right, all wearing one of daddy’s flannel shirts, each pretending he was hugging them with arms of the shirt. She kept their minds off of the events of earlier with planning daddy’s welcome home Thanksgiving dinner just a few days away. Her heart warmly swelled as their children giggled and smiled and anticipated trading in their flannel shirts for real hugs. As did she.

His eyes closed, drifting off to dream world. His sister had already fallen alseep. She was dozing herself as David Letterman came to an end when the ring of the doorbell startled her. She nervously walked down the steps wrapped in his flannel shirt and peered out of the peep hole in the locked door. Her legs buckled and she fell to the floor at the sight of an Army officer and a Chaplain standing outside under the porch light dressed in their green class ‘A’ uniforms adorned with medals and such.

The Army officer and Chaplain awash in the porch light could hear her wailing through the door, “but he was supposed to be home for Thanksgiving in just three days.”

What are you thankful for this Thanksgiving? Sgt Hook out.


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27 Comments »
  1. Think About It

    Go Here to Sgt. Hook’s and read a Thanksgiving post that will make you think. THIS is only one of the reason’s I’m so glad he’s blogging again….

    Trackback by Tammi's World — 23 November 2005 @ 0146


  2. Powerful post. On this Thanksgiving, as in all the ones prior, I give thanks for the Warriors of our Country. From this grateful American I humbly offer my thanks, and will remember all of you in my prayers.

    Comment by Gypsy — 23 November 2005 @ 0238


  3. For once… I am at a loss for words… (grabbing a tissue)…

    Comment by Girl on the Blog — 23 November 2005 @ 0249


  4. Thanks for reminding me what’s truly important.

    Have a great Thanksgiving,
    B

    Comment by Bryan Strawser — 23 November 2005 @ 0436


  5. Very powerful post, that brought tears to my eyes. I’m thankful for the loving family I have, the support they’ve always given me. I’m thankful for the new family I’m a part of and their endless support and honorable service. I’m thankful that this Thanksgiving, I’ll be here, at home, with the ones who love me before I head off to bct and AIT.

    I’m not sure where you’re at right now, but I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving, peaceful, restful, with the ones you love.

    Comment by Desult — 23 November 2005 @ 0803


  6. Read and Be Thankful

    There’s a post a Sgt. Hook’s that left me in tears. Tomorrow as we celebrate Thanksgiving with our families, say a prayer for our men and women of our Armed Forces and their families. Go and read Home for Thanksgiving.

    Trackback by Thoughts by Seawitch — 23 November 2005 @ 1331


  7. Wow!! I’m copying, pasting and linking back to you Sgt. Thank you for a powerful reminder of Thanksgiving Day.

    Comment by Barry Ross aka Griz — 23 November 2005 @ 1455


  8. It’s been awhile since I started reading you again. Welcome back! You have a way with words. Yes I am Thankful this year. #1 Son returned last May from his year in Afghanistan and has moved on to Ft. Hood from Hawaii, #2 Son is now in Belgium with NATO, and #3 Son is still making the Air Force proud (we get to see him at Christmas!) THANK YOU for all your posts and for your service to our country and Thank your wife for her sacrifice too!

    Comment by Laura — 23 November 2005 @ 1505


  9. Darnit, you need to post a mascara emergency alert on these things.

    Comment by Laurie — 23 November 2005 @ 1550


  10. The sacrifices our military hero’s make.
    Powerful and tragic, uplifting and sad.

    I give thanks to all of them, past, present, future.

    Comment by joe citizen — 23 November 2005 @ 1557


  11. Thank you for the reminder, Sergeant Major.

    I still pray and am most thankful for my friends and brothers in arms not just in the sandbox, but serving all over.

    Best wishes to you and yours, and those serving worldwide.

    Stu Clark
    CPL, USA (former)

    Comment by Stu Clark — 23 November 2005 @ 1622


  12. Sgt. Hook, Thanks for posting this. I am thankful that my Ranger son is back in the US this holiday season. This will be the first holiday with him since the war began. I am thankful that he is still with us to share in the Joy of the holidays, even if he’s not here at home. However, my heart is still with his 101st family & other soldier buddies that once again will be far from home this year. May God watch over all of our military serving abroad and send blessings and thanks to their families. This was a tear jerker story for sure. Thankyou for sharing it.
    God bless the many men and women serving our country in the name of Freedom from terrorism. I am always praying for Peace on Earth.

    Comment by Becky — 23 November 2005 @ 1648


  13. Geez…as if I don’t cry enough all on my own…

    Beautifully written, Hook. Thanks for the reminder.

    Comment by Joan — 23 November 2005 @ 1721


  14. OK, rip my heart out. whew. Great post. What a reminder for all that we have to be thankful for.

    Comment by Sgt Lori Fields — 23 November 2005 @ 1907


  15. That was painfull. Thank you for providing me perspective of not only what I have to be thankfull for, but what it costs.

    Comment by Web — 23 November 2005 @ 1952


  16. I just arrived back here, and I see that “Sgt. Hook” has been re-started.

    It is nice to see you again! Are you still in Afghanistan, or back home now (or elsewhere, like when you were in Hawai’i that time I inquired…)?

    I see that your weblog has been re-designed… Are the old entries (and comment posts) still available? I had linked to some of them before, in my past writings and blog entries… I like it when things stay online, for us to reference and remember. But it seems that so much - in the Blogosphere and elsewhere - is changing, so rapidly.

    Well, whereever you are, and whereever you may be in the future, I am glad to know that you are safe, and I wanted to wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving!!

    Comment by Aakash — 23 November 2005 @ 2037


  17. Heartbreaking, but make you realize that life is to short to take for granted. I’ve learned that you can’t ‘just go thru’ the motions of life but you have to appreciate every part of it … good & bad and hopefully become a better person. Everyday I make sure to tell the people I love that they are loved and thank them for being part of my life. I am thankful for the opportunity to do this everyday. HAPPY THANKSGIVING Sgt Hook … and all you other Americians.

    Comment by Lisa — 23 November 2005 @ 2148


  18. What are you thankful for?

    Thanksgiving has always been one of my favorite holidays. This year, it’s bittersweet. I am sitting here with tears streaming down my face, knowing how difficult the holidays are going to be for so many families this year.

    Trackback by Politics of a Patriot — 23 November 2005 @ 2202


  19. That was very moving and beautifully written. As others have said, thank you for reminding us of what’s important and for your service to our wonderful country. G-d bless you and everyone else who is keeping us safe. I give thanks for every one of you.

    Comment by Esther — 23 November 2005 @ 2229


  20. I am thankful for the years I spent as a Soldier and Leader.

    GREAT post. Had to read it a couple of times. Thanks — Hooah!!

    Comment by Echo9er -- aka David — 24 November 2005 @ 0215


  21. As I finished reading this beautiful, tragic post, Toby Keith’s “American Soldier” came on…how utterly appropriate.
    Thank you, Sgt. Hook, thank you!

    Comment by Anna — 24 November 2005 @ 0312


  22. Grateful for the wonderful people I met in 21 years in the Navy, and grateful for those who are serving today, protecting me. Thanks guys and gals.

    Comment by Crazy Politico — 24 November 2005 @ 0412


  23. Thanks.

    Comment by Some Soldier's Mom — 24 November 2005 @ 0544


  24. Well done.

    f

    Comment by Fred Schoeneman — 27 November 2005 @ 0143


  25. Damn Sarge…that’s not nice to make a girl cry like that. A very good reminder of what we should be thankful for.

    HH6

    Comment by Household6 — 27 November 2005 @ 1827


  26. Powerful post … Thank you for sharing. Too much in our lives is taken for granted - a jolt of reminder is good for the soul.

    Comment by Barb — 30 November 2005 @ 0623


  27. So glad to read you again!!
    Keep your helmet on,
    Love
    P and the SA’s

    Comment by patti bader — 30 November 2005 @ 1716


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